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I have a title for my cartoon...

Posted by TheIncredibleD - May 15th, 2009


The title is...
"Star Grounds: Pico's Saber" - i chose that since a lot of people wanted Star Grounds, and it leaves it open for sequels.
See the prelimanary logo below - i should have a better version by tuesday.

Cast List (subject to change)

Name: Pico
Secies: Human
Affiliation: Jedi
Rank: Jedi Master
Lightsaber: Standard blue lightsaber
Notes: Pico is good at both lightsaber fighting and The Force. He uses them both in combat. While still the padawan* of Grand Master Fulp, Pico helped to defend the Sith attack on the Jedi Acadamy. Several Sith were killed in the battle. The only known survivors are Alukard, Hanzou and Darth Casandra herself.

Name: Nene
Species: Human
Affiliation: Jedi
Rank: Padawan
Lightsaber: Standard green lightsaber.
Notes: Nene is best at lightsaber combat, but uses the Force to jump impossibly high and add strength to her attacks. Nene is also able to cloak herself using The Force. Nene is the padawan of Master Pico.

Name: Darnell
Species: Human
Affiliation: Jedi
Rank: Jedi Knight
Lightsaber: Double-bladed purple lightsaber.
Notes: Darnell is very tall and muscular. He prefers to avoid using the Force altogether and concentrate on his awesome lightsaber fighting skills. He will, however, use the Force when necessary.

Name: Casandra
Species: Penilian
Affiliation: Sith
Rank: Sith Lord
Lightsaber: Standard Red Lightsaber
Notes: Darth Casandra is in human form most of the time, but has the ability to morph into a monstruous Penilian. She is handy with her lightsaber, and tends to use the Force to throw people around the room. She also has big boobs :3

Name: Hanzou
Species: Cyborg, formerly human.
Affiliation Sith
Rank: Sith Warrior
Lightsaber: curved-hilt red Lightsaber*
Notes: Darth Hanzou suffered grevious injuries at the hands of Grand Master Fulp, but was rebuilt as a cyborg by his Master, Darth Casandra. Because of his electronic components, he cannot use Force Lightning, and instead has concentrated on developing his skills with his lightsaber. He has almost perfected the art of one-on-one lightsaber combat. His extra-special Cyborg Vision allows him to spot Cloaked Nene.

Name: Alukard
Species: Human
Affiliation: Sith
Rank: Sith Warrior
Lightsaber: two red shotos*
Notes: Darth Alukard is an extremely proficient Force-weilder and has chosen to use a lightsaber only when necessary for defence. Instead, he will use his deadly force powers to overwhelm his opponent and keep them at a distance.

Name: Tom Fulp
Species: Human
Affiliation: Jedi
Rank: Jedi Grand Master
Notes: One of the most powerful Jedi in history, Grand Master Fulp currently sits at the head of the Jedi Council. He personally trained Pico and Darnell as his padawans, and participated in the defence of the Jedi Acadamy, where he defeated several Sith including Hanzou and managed, with the help of his padawan Pico, to drive away Casandra and Alukard.

Species: Tankmen
Affiliation: Jedi
Notes: Armed with laser blasters, the Tankmen are Master Pico's personal militia. It is believed they were discovered on some sort of post-apocalyptic world. They drive tanks. And wear goggles. And make cock jokes to boost morale.

Species: Uberkids
Affiliation: Sith
Notes: The Uberkids are genetically modified Stormtroopers, hand-picked by Darth Casandra and genetically modified to be better in every way than ordinary Stormtroopers. More accurate with a blaster, and with incredible hand-to- hand fighting skills, the Uberkids form Casandra's personal guard abord her starship. They wear flexible grey armour suits that can absorb most blaster bolts.

*padawan: basically a jedi apprentice. a padawan will accompany his/her master on missions, and learn about the force from them
*curved-hilt lightsaber is a lightsaber with a curved hilt, silly. >:( Cout Dooku had one.
*shoto: a short lightsaber. yoda used one of these.

I have a title for my cartoon...


Comments

I think Star Grounds might be an ok title. Or Tank Wars? lol idk but this looks pretty awesome. I think it could be something cool when it's finished.

Hmm, Star Ground is a good idea! I didn't think of that one. :)
I will include it in my list of suggestions.

"pico´s blue glowing cane".yeah i know,i suck at making names

I dunno Pico Wars?

maybe pico wars

I thought about using Pico Wars, but I dont think I will. Its a bit too... obvious.

Convict as Darth Vader or the Emperor. Or Piconjo as a sith. Also try Fulp vs. Pico; creator vs. CREATION!

As a title, definately go with Star Grounds.

I think I will go with "Star Grounds: Pico's Saber"
That leaves it open for a possible sequel in 2011.

haha you got the logo up! haha thats awesome dude! When will it be done?

This is just a sort of... experimental logo. See the white edge around the tank? I need to edit that to be either gone, or all around the tank. Or, i have discovered, by filling the inside of the tank with the STAR colour, it looks quite... rustic.

Star Grounds itself i will release on 30th April 2010, in time for Pico Day. I am having an awesome attack, though. XD XD XD XD

And YOU will get a special thanks in the credits, for thinking up the name.

Well well, someone's been busy. The logo looks great and you should have something truly amazing come Pico Day 2010.

Ugh, SimonBirch. Everywhere I go you peak your head around the corner. IncredibleD I already banned this idiot from my site. Look on his profile and see how he treats people. He spammed one of my posts too. IncredibleD, I'd ban him now.

Cool :D
Hömm, that Star Grounds tankman is kinda fuzzyly rip offed :P You can see alot white pixels in it
If ya really are going to do that flash, I can remake that logo for you :3

Yes, I did it quickly in paint(!) to see how it would look. If you do want to remake the logo yerself, I can send you my source materials. Otherwise, I'll do a much nicer version on photoshop, which has anti-aliasing. That way I can give the tank a nice glowy outline.